Treatment: Forgiveness

 

Concept

 

Genre: Drama / experimental

 

Logline: What a man does after he gets done having a fight with his wife in Detroit

 

Purpose:

The idea behind the shots and the audio is to make the viewer put themselves into the situation and relate to either of the sides of these characters.

 

 

Characters:

 

Business man (main): Michael Lucido

 

His normal attire

 

 

Woman (Support main): Katie Alyce

Aprox. the same age distraught and crying out of frustration

 

Synopsis:

 

Story:

Starts off post verbal fight, the main is walking around feeling down and has a lot on his mind. He goes for a drive and to collect his thoughts. While he's driving we flash to bits of the fight when it snaps back to him he has a reaction to it like as if it hits him. he ends up collecting his thoughts and goes back to his apartment. He finds his girlfriend crying in their bed. He comes up and lays next to her from behind and wraps his arm around her. And we cut black.

 

Audio:

The fight scene is going to be muffled so you can barely hear the actual fight. It should sound like when you hear an explosion go off next to you so you go partially deaf. Like its in a tube and you can only but barely hear what's going on.